Dense
a bitter taste in the mouth
fog shrouds
unable to see the path at my feet
stumbling over broken flagstones
concrete juts to the sky
what happened here?
Where am I?
Am I lost in a new world
or the old one?
Unable to see
unable to focus
on what is before me?
Time is ever fluid
moving
forward
backward
sideways
never knowing what will be born
what era will be relived
only that the fog encompasses me.
Struggling
eyes blinded by darkness
futile
to see what is before
for that way lays madness.
Do I drop?
Do I curl?
Do I scream to the skies?
Bear witness to my fear
my shriveled husk
chained
to this black rock you call a heart.
March 19/19
Image by Enrique Meseguer from Pixabay
Love that last line. Really god poem
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Thank you am glad you enjoyed. 😃
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You did well! I’m impressed 😊
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Thank you?😕
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What’s wrong?
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Nothing other than you were impressed?
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I really like your poetry Jay-lyn! I particularly liked this one a bit more.
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You have never told me you were impressed before 😂😂
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I’m impressed with your creativity. Im impressed with how much you talk to me about anything about nothing. I’m impressed that someone can goof off as much as I can. I’m impressed that you haven’t got tired of me yet.
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I told you I would not get tired of you!!! Stop it just like an annoying little brother!!!😂😂😂
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*noogie* *fart*
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Did you just fart on me????💩💩💩😫😫😫
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*hug* best sister ever..
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😂😂😂😂😂
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Best brother ever…..maybe maybe not lol bratty for sure
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I implore you to find a gooder brother
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There is none
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Darn tootin’ toots
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We have so much fun.
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I’m pretty happy!
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Better be…..
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What ya gonna do??
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Don’ make me come down there.
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You got over a thousand miles lol!
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I got a broom buddy
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It’s awful cold still…
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Mwahahahahahahaha
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Dress warm lol!!!!!!
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Awwwwwwww……. who is this Eclectic Contrarian? You’re exchange is so cute.
Great post!!
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He is another blogger. Lives in southern state with his beautiful wife who he admits he would be lost without. We have kinda adopted one another as siblings and pick on each other all the time. We also suck people into reading our ‘talks’ lol
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It was well worth getting sucked into. We all need soul brothers and sisters.
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I am glad you enjoyed. We love providing comedic turns for our fellow bloggers.
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Most definitely needed and appreciated. Keep up the good work.😉💖
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😂😂❤❤❤
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Thank you. 😊
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