Waves
silky smooth water
crystal clear
I wade through
lost in my thoughts
my wonderings
head so far in the clouds
many wonder
are my feet on the ground?
I am a lonely girl
building sand castles
from fluffy white clouds
when all I want
all I need…..
Romance
love
adoration
once words I spoke aloud
with meaning
emotion
now are dead
tasteless
tripping from my tongue
venom to the soul.
I am a lonely girl
building sand castles
with moats
with gates
along the sea shore
when all I want
all I need…..
Courage
bravery
determination
I will move through
face the pain
give grief its home
yearning for absolution
ability to forgive myself.
I am a lonely girl
building fantasies
romances
holding my heart captive
when all I want
all I need……
I use to think was you.
©April 25/19
Picture via Pinterest and as always found by The Eclectic Contrarian
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Yes I would love that. You could include yesterday’s poem as well?
Name: Jay-lyn Doerksen
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I like the way you wrote this poem. Powerful.
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Thank you so much.
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I really like this one!
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Thank you
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Jay, I know you like dark stuff and all that, but love is where you shine! Whether it be the spring or winter of love, you get your heart’s point through clearly!
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Thank you. Not sure why in such a ‘romancey’ place. Would like some of my darkness to come through
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Please let the “romancey” continue!!
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Ugh
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Lol!!! You can’t be a weirdo queen all the time! Be in love every now and then!!
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Nah love is uncomfortable and never works out for me
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I don’t want you thinking that just because I have a wife that everything in the world worked out for me. You’re talking to a guy that has some stories. I lost way too much time, money and brain cells over women. And there’s a lot I still think about because I just don’t understand how someone functions the way some of them did.
But I never lost my faith in love.
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Most all my stuff is loveish stuff. I don’t mind it. I try to dig as deep into it as I can and see just how deep I can be about it.
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I shall think about it
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Here’s the thing, Poetry is like trying to touch someone verbally but still feel it physically. There’s a lot of perimeters to it.
The poetry I post is to make people think and also feel. I try hard to with my “special poetry” to evoke feelings in my wife. Sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn’t. But nevertheless, I keep trying.
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We will see on the romancey stuff. I need to write one dark one to off put all the girliness. Yes I am deflecting. Gotta run to work.
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You are awesome at the girliness!! I love the girliness!
Just get back to me when you can.
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I will.
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nice repetition to show progress
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Thank you so much. ☺
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Its too much feelingfullll ..cant describe😭😭
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Thank you. I hope while it made you feel sad that you still enjoyed.
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