Daddy’s View

***I am working on a series of poems as they speak to me dealing with a specific kink. The Daddy/babygirl relationship between two consenting adults. Please read with that in mind and no judgement.

This poem continue from Daddy’s babygirl and Brat at Play.

I wonder
does she even realize
what I see
when she is on her knees?
Her devotion
her trust
blind me
those doe eyes
glistening with desire
gasps of air 
as she tries to breath
amongst the throes of her orgasm.
Her skin
flushed red
blush pink
responding now
to the slightest of touch
to the merest breath
enough really to drive her over the edge.
I become lost in her moans
as her body writhes
beneath my skilled fingers
playing her like an instrument
changing the tone
the way she gasps
with each press of my tongue.
I am lost within her
my babygirl
my delight
I wonder if she knows
really knows
how beautiful she is tonight?
©Nov. 26/19
Picture via PInterest

Author: Jay-lyn Doerksen

I am a single hard working mom in her 40's. I have always written poetry and I love words. I live with depression and its ups downs. This is a space where I can create and write all that I need to.

22 thoughts on “Daddy’s View”

  1. This is freakin’ Ah-mazing! I am so glad I went back and read the three parts in their entirety like you intended. And I definitely don’t think this is out of your comfort zone because it flows so naturally and pulls one in with those vivid emotions. I absolutely loved it. In fact it inspires me to try erotic poetry. You nailed it, Jay-lyn! ❤ 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much. I am not sure where this is going but I am loving the ride. There is a sense of freedom when you expose yourself like this. Either people will understand or not. This is a beautiful give and take relationship that truly goes beyond just the sexual aspect. I have been worried that I am not conveying what I want properly but have received a few resounding hots so I guess all right lol. Part four will be along today some time.

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      1. I like the dynamic power exchange that going on here. The explicit display of mutual consent allows you to portray kinky sexual energy in detail and it makes for a sensuous read which is something, as a reader, I always want to see in erotic narratives. Looking forward to part 4. 🙂

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