Despite the blizzard that is she
despite the roaring winds
the cruel cold
harsh darkness
within.
Burning candle
unaffected by the storm
bowed
head bent
so very very dear.
She is strong
standing tall
in her pain
wrapped around
chains that bind
holding her to the wall
holding her memories.
Mouth open
silent screams
all she wants
to be heard.
Look into her eyes
see within
darkened despair
agony
fear
that she is not enough
never enough
for those looking at her.
Gather her close
rekindle the fire
burn through the coldness
bring to her desire.
Watch her astonishment
as you remind her
once more
you will always be there.
A light in the blizzard.
A port in the storm.
You are home.
©Jan. 29/20
Picture via Pinterest
This poem was begun by John at The Eclectic Contrarian and sent my way to develop. This was the first time we have done it with a poem. Other times he has sent me pictures to write about. He is my adopted brother in another country from a totally different set of parents who is a great man and a really good friend. We also provide great comedy free of charge in the comments section. 🙂
This is the link to John’s take on it. Polarity
Mines better 😁
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What do you mean yours is better?
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My version of the poem…. because I’m gooder than you 😁😆🤣
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You are not! 😝😝😝😝
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Just a smidgen
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Never
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Sometimes
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Nuhuh
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Yes huh!!
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No
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Hard headed woman gah!!
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I am not!
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😝😝
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😊
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Stop pretending to be a saint.
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I’m not!!
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With your smiley faces and nose sticking up in air
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Family resemblance
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😝
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💨💩
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🤢🤢🤢
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😃
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😁 Gotta take my mouthy kid to school. Erg
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Ok have fun!
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With surly boy? I almost prefer sloth boy
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I prefer a good sister but I take what I get… 🤷♂️
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🤦And so do I. Are you going to provide link to your poem or vise versa so people can read both?
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I have to go find it in your comments……
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That is convenient. So you have no proof that your poem is gooder?
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Oh it is! I just have to find it….
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I will wait. We have lots of conversations.
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Found it. Finally lol!! Just needs some brushing up and good to go.
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Post to your page and link back please. Gotta run down to work. Have great day 🙃🙃
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Had a blessed day sissy!
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Done.
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I’m just the light to your darkness 🤪
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Omg goofy! 😁😂🤓
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😊
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Smh
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Don’t hurt yourself
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Too late 🙃🙃
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🙄figures
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🤕🤕
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Ok! This conversation was so funny!
Sir, you’d best put on some better manners. I know now that I’m not the only one you pick on like crazy and are “mean” to!
But y’all are really funny!
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He likes to think he is the good one lol
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That’s not always the truth though 😉
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Not always 😂😂
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He’s a mess.
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Totally! He must be to have adopted me ha ha ha ha
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Lol he adopted me!
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Me too. Maybe you are the good one and I am the bad one 😈😈
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No way!
I’m his daughter…. who are you?
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His sister
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Another one? Grief… he must have 24
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Tried to told ya…. big family…
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English!
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I’m English, German, Irish….
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Tried to told ya???
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Tried to told me what?
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Your response to Lydia
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That’s the language of our peoples
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Oh well not mine lol
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Yeah you too “sister”
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No I meant that is not how y’all talk I’s knewd better dan dat
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You best get in the know or I’ll unadopt
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You keep threatening me with that and you know you can’t….there is that no taking backsies…..I am pretty sure that was your clause so I could not unadopt you 💨💨💨
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You can unadopt me!
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No I can’t there is that clause…..
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If there weren’t??
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You would still be stuck with me. Once I adopt you you are stuck with me.
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😕😏
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😁😁💨💨💨
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💨💩 oops… 😁
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Forever mwahahahahahaha
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Good thing we’re in different countries lol!!
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🤦🙃😁😁😂
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But I have so many aunts, but you only have one daughter… wow!
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I’m a very acquired taste….
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Yeah yeah
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Obviously I am. Not everyone is beating down my door to be my relative lol!!
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Lol that is funny!
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We are
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Not sure why
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Phooey!
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😝😝😝She has your number
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40??
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Smh
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Uhhhh ma’am, I’m the good one in these parts and you best recognize… 😝
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Nah uh
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Don’t you have a youngin to take somewhere or work?
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I was on lunch
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🙄
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Now second lunch
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That stuff goes to your butt and thighs…
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I didn’t eat more.
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Oh……
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Hey now! Behave yourself!
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Go to your room! Grounded! 😝
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😦 Not nice!
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No I ain’t nice! I’m John 😊
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Ha!
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He is bossy
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No kidding! 😉
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To your room missy
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Stop it!
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Now now
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Not talking to you
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Bwahahahahahahaha
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No…
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Yes
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No.
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Good night!
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Good night! 🙂
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I just met another one of your sisters!
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I know 🤦♂️ she’s the worst one
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Lol that’s FUNNY!
Be good daddy!
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I’m always good….
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Are not
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Are too now shush
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Only sometimes
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When he chooses to be
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Yes ma’am. That’s more like it!
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Don’t let his Southern Gentleman Charm fool you otherwise lol 😁😁
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Haha! I like that!
I’m a very southern charm too! 😉
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Yes but am surer you are a much better charmer 😉
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Lol thanks!
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Most welcome 🤓
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Or should I have said I have a southern charm… I’m not really one
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Well still am sure you have more charm lol
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Oh my! 😉 I hope he doesn’t find out!
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Tio late lol
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I’m running away you’ll he send me to my room again!
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Ok……….
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Uh oh! You’re here!
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Hey there brother. Getting to know my new niece I like her. 🤓
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Yeah that’s it!
Thanks 😉 😉
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😁
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Is he talking to you even though I can’t see it?
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No he is pouting because we ganged up on him chortle chortle 😜😜
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Hehehe this is so good!
I’m going to be mean and let you deal with his attitude… cuz I need to finish school. I’ll be back at some point though!
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Well now not so sure about that one….enjoy your day
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Lol yes ma’am you too
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Ty
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Yw
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😝😝😝😝
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I heard every word y’all said!!
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Groans… yeah! That always happens when I think I got you
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Ha!! 😝
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I like my new niece lol
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She was such a sweet girl……
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And polite.
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🤦♂️😭
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I own that!
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😝😝😝😝
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No secret conversations without me!
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Well congrats… you win lol!!!
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What do you mean I win?
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I have currently scored 1-2. But I think people are biased against me
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What are you talking about?
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Only 1 person likes mine
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It is not a competition. And I need to go and link to your post
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It’s not but people like giving me a hard time
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Well who cares about other people. This was just fun for us.
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Because mines gooder that’s why!
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100th comment 😁
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Lol
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