Now & Forever

Feeling the brush of your lips
against the side of my neck
your hand holding my hair
caught tight in your fist
I tremble.
Desire flooding my body
worst kind
still I want you
your hands
body pressed to mine.
Teeth nipping sensitive skin
fingers digging
struggling to keep them from you
not wanting to give in
fighting to control
knowing that I cannot.
I am powerless.
Flash that smile
chocolate eyes melting
I will fall to my knees
head bent in submission
your voice curls
thick with passion
unable to stand
you have me at your mercy.
I am writhing.
I am yours.
Forever more.
ยฉApril 20/19
Picture via Pinterest and found by The Eclectic Contrarian.

Author: Jay-lyn Doerksen

I am a single hard working mom in her 40's. I have always written poetry and I love words. I live with depression and its ups downs. This is a space where I can create and write all that I need to.

109 thoughts on “Now & Forever”

  1. Ohhhh, Jay-lyn!! This left me breathless!! Loved this intimate and passionate word video and the sensual and sexy close ups and images your words conjured in the mind and the rush toward oneness!!! Especially loved the bonding lines of your ending:
    “I am longing.
    I am writhing.
    I am yours.
    Forever more.
    In “my” humble opinion, I think all the readers of this poem would agree that we need you to create a prequel and sequel to this – it leaves us wanting – More!! Make this into a trilogy!! Every line and thought – Delicious!!! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!


    1. Thank you so much. I am speechless with your compliments. You have put a massive smile on my face and I cannot thank you enough. I am so glad you enjoyed. I will take your trilogy idea under advisement. ๐Ÿค“๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜˜

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      1. Ahhh, then it was Mission Accomplished because that’s the way your words left me!!! Not just compliments, My Dear – praise and adoration for your masterpiece!!! So happy to know I put a “massive smile” on your face! Hope you getting a little “humming” from your heart too! I adored this!!! Would love to hear an audio with your voice reading this too! I don’t think the inner voice in my head does it justice!!! Oh, great!!! Would love a trilogy. This felt like just an appetizer!!!

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  2. Just like a dozen donuts all to myself… I canโ€™t have you!! But I do!! I love you I hate you! Oh what the heck, nom nom nom!!! Lol

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      1. Iโ€™m getting tired of your attitude.

        Ok Iโ€™m cooking me a steak and you can have some ramen noodles.

        And weโ€™re having donuts whether you like it or not..

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      2. I am responsible for myself and my son. I only work to pay my bills and out food on table. I do not live for my work. I live for my life. My friends. My family. (Truth be told my friends are more my family). I live for me. It took a long time to realize this. But now that I have there is bo going back. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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      3. It really did take me a long time. When you no longer live for everyone else (excluding spouses/significant others and children) your life becomes so much clearer. What is important to you becomes so much clearer.

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      4. I never tire of you. Thatโ€™s why Iโ€™m always concerned about you and others getting tired of me. I can talk endlessly about anything for hours..

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